The Descent WIP 8 with first draft of composition

My eighth draft of my assessment, implementing changes suggested to me by a producer I was lucky enough to have an informal meeting with the other day. He suggested some editing adjustments to tighten it up and help keep the tension, as well as reordering some of the shots to help with the narrative structure of the film. It was a really productive meeting! His background is in commercials, so has a very keen eye for sharp editing and pacing which was very beneficial. I'm now waiting for the second draft of the composition to see how that goes with this latest edit, and then hopefully that will then be picture and composition locked in, with the final thing needed being the sound design. Have managed to be very efficient with my time on this project and so far so good, so I should have enough time to get everything polished up before the submission date.

Need to start writing my exegesis now!